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Susan Sibley-Rodgers's avatar

Good point. But sometimes you can miss something that got cut and was needed to explain something later. Then it leaves a spot where it doesn’t make sense to the reader. Usually catch those though.

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Lewis Campfield's avatar

Great story. I'll be thinking about it for a while. I feel I am missing something. I'll have to read it again.

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